6th October |
Dear Jimena,
How are you? Is everything ok in
I'd like to have news from you. I’ve tried to phone you on your birthday but you didn’t answer because it was switched off.
Next week I’m travelling four days to
In Calafell the weather is still sunny and hot, and the water is quite warm. It’s a pity that winter is coming. I don't really like winter but I love skiing in Andorra.
Granny told us, you were coming for one week holidays at the beginning of December. I want you to phone me to make plans together because I miss you a lot.
Please send me a postcard or a picture of your school.
Anyway, I miss you, please write soon.
I'd be fantastic to hear from you and your experience in England.
Lots of kisses.
María
1 comments:
Hi Maria,
I don't know why I can't edit your post, so I'm posting some corrections here:
1-Punctuation: after "my brother" you must include a comma (Alvaro, my brother, ...)
2-Punctuation: no comma after "us" in "Granny told us..."
3-Grammar: Last line "I'd be fantastic" is actually "It'd be fantastic..."
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